Naze...that bass and kick is too muddy sounding...and that snare doesn't really fit in anywhere with a beat like this...both of those things really disrupted the overall flow of the beat...and the intro kind of set up a disappointment for when the beat drops...since the way you set up that reverse cymbal implied that the track was gonna be real hype then it wasn't...sound choice and eq'ing could have helped you alot here...
hy_skyz. nice sample choice there. nice chopping also but the drum patterning didn't really mesh with the sample...the bassline was good though...I like this joint...the only thing is replacing that snare with a more fitting one and change the pattern up a little bit to be more fitting with sample...
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