hey man thanks for the sample, well what i would say is keep doing what ur doing listening to other flips, in this case i think the first chop is good that string one, but then the one u put in the change it up the ohhh one i'm not really feeling, also for me it changes a bit randomly so i would suggest try keeping a bit more structure to it e.g change it up every 4th bar. try layering ur drums a bit too. its got potential though keep at it. check out my myspace beats lemme know what u think of them or theres some chops on there in some tracks to maybe show you what i mean. keep it up.