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Ant McQueen Ant McQueen is offline
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What's up everybody, this a joint I did for this girl that I'm feeling. She's always asking me to tell her how I feel about her so I made this beat. I hope y'all enjoy it !!!
05-08-2008
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Finesse06 Finesse06 is online now
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now write 4 her.

i feel u close
when u not near
knight in shinin armor is here
i care
cant believe it took so long
so much years
my heart is the throne
baby u be the heir...

jus a lil somethin. lol.

beats hot tho. might hit u up 4 upcoming mixtape use.

Dont Copy, Create...

05-09-2008
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Ant McQueen Ant McQueen is offline
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Good looking fam ! I see you were getting your flow on, LOL. I actually started writing a song to this joint a minute ago, I wanna make sure it's as close to perfect as possible.
05-09-2008
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EmAyEnEyeSee EmAyEnEyeSee is offline
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yo family, this is honestly such a dope beat....this is where sampling comes into its own element man - EXCEPT the chorus part. man you was on a winner, i was typing this like ahhh this is dope, summer music. then when i heard the 'AH' and michael in the chorus i was like lol please get rid of that part man. i would switch it up, maybe add a fast bassline too, and sure, try incorperate a different sample into it. what i do, is basically have the reason file playing in the background...then go through all my smaples using soundforge (which plays in the 'open file' screen, so u dont actually have to open every single sample to see if it wud worl) to see what sounds dope. due to the note form of that ^ im sure theres so many vocal samples you could lay on top.

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Ant McQueen Ant McQueen is offline
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I see what your saying, but I added the moan to add a sense of intimacy and to censor out the TOUCH YOU, FEEL YOU. I really appreciate the feedback man, cause most people come into the thread but don't leave any comments. THANK YOU for even listening to my sh*t, LOL. I filtered out the bass, I'm gonna redo the beat in the future and hopefully I can get a bassist to play the bassline for me.
05-09-2008
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lovin this tune, head bobbin, i might as well write to this since i'm at work, my suggestion is to take out that chorus tho, it kills the mood imo

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Ant McQueen Ant McQueen is offline
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Quote:
Originally Posted by EmAyEnEyeSee
yo family, this is honestly such a dope beat....this is where sampling comes into its own element man - EXCEPT the chorus part. man you was on a winner, i was typing this like ahhh this is dope, summer music. then when i heard the 'AH' and michael in the chorus i was like lol please get rid of that part man. i would switch it up, maybe add a fast bassline too, and sure, try incorperate a different sample into it. what i do, is basically have the reason file playing in the background...then go through all my smaples using soundforge (which plays in the 'open file' screen, so u dont actually have to open every single sample to see if it wud worl) to see what sounds dope. due to the note form of that ^ im sure theres so many vocal samples you could lay on top.
I just use records and my MPC so if I want to see if something will work I have to try it.
05-09-2008
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lanzemurdok lanzemurdok is offline
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pretty hot. Hmm.. i agree with the michael jackson part. it sounds a little bit out of place, but otherwise a nice sensual beat.
05-09-2008
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Nice use of the beat, the Micheal Jackson sticks out , fade it down , probably get a softer drum on there to. Other that it's a good. Oh yeah that UNNNHHH....that needs to come down some lol. not bad.
05-09-2008
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herneythegreat herneythegreat is offline
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that ish is HOT!

I Preach Drums! Make them Knock Your Block off!

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