it was okay to me. Its commericial and simple. Not downing simple or commericial. At times simple can be good you know "more is less" but I feel this beat isn't the case. Commericial, I've heard some good commericial, yes with synths and 808's you can still make fire, but here I just feel something I hear everyday on soundclick. Not really seeing much too creativity or orginality but its cool, I've seen alot worse beat making videos lol. Keep at it man, I'll be posting alot of mine up here soon aswell!