Dude,I congratulate you on making your first beat; however, I gotta be honest with you- it needs some work done to it.First off, there is no detailed pattern at all, just sounds like it's all over the place,no real direction to it. Moreover it need better arangement ,and appropiate change-up, wheen needed.Latly, a better mixdown.Like isaid, it is not bad, just needs some work to it.Good job on getting over that first obstcle of making your first one; just keep at it and you'll be fine. What's your setup ?
