You might want to make the sample go faster throughout the track, although for the intro, it is good. And change the drum kits you're using for the beat, and also make it more interesting, switch things up, because repetition is one thing that will ALWAYS kill your track, no matter how dope it sounds, or even if you got the hottest sample in the world... I really liked that sample though... I would ask you to return the favor, but I don't have any new stuff on here...lol
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