The drums are not strong enough, but the patterns are good for the track. The FIRST synth melody is nice for the track and has a good feel. The breaks and drops I wouldn't have done that way. They are done at odd points in the song. The second synth melody is kinda too basic and gets repetitive and annoying.

I don't know how you recorded it, but the volume is too low and it needs to be mixed better. You said you were still working on it, so I guess you guys are going to record it over? The slowdown of the voice sample at the end is pretty tight.

Over all, it needs some work on the things above, but the concept and the overall vibe is good.

What are you using to produce? Oh, I have only been producing for about a year, but have been listening to music, playing the keys and studying music composition for a while, so I am just going by what I know. I hope that helped.