very choppy, i basically agree with other dude. could be nice tho, just get some switch ups, listen to the song you sampled again & try to pick out another part for a change up.
agree with remarks above. sample is too choppy. see if you can smooth that out some, maybe a slight reverb will help a little. def could use a change up or 2. i would like to hear some stronger kicks, but thats just my preference. has potential though.
I'll try that reverb Regency. Yeah, when I first heard my chops I thought it was done, but thanks to you guys comments, I know I still have a lot of changes to do