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flossnntossn3@yahoo. flossnntossn3@yahoo. is offline
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man sometimes when im mad into making a beat i get so caught up in it for the next week i cant even tell if the beat is dope or even if i should throw it away or not so ima let you decide i just made this and i dont know if i should chuck it or keep it please hook me up with feedback and ill do the same if you drop me a link

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=5246287
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JiggSaw JiggSaw is offline
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YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...... wtf was that? No offense but that ish is terribly wack. It doesn't flow at all. You need to study rhythm. Just listen to a song on the radio and clap your hands to the beat. You need to do that for about an hour. That was really bad. If there's anything I can help you with, please let me know.

P.S. The sample was actually decent.


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dergillz dergillz is offline
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yeah that was really off beat. That sample sounds dope though, definitely has potential. I don't know how most people lay out their beats but I like to get a nice drum patter that flows real nice layed down first, then take the sample that I like and make chop according to how they would fit with the pattern i've layed down. A lot of times I already know how I want the sample to go, but you get what i'm sayin. Work on your drum pattern first, then work on your chops.
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JiggSaw JiggSaw is offline
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Yo, I listened to some of your other beats and they're not that bad. You have an ear for samples, so that's a good thing. It sounds like you need to work on your chopping and how to incorporate it with your drum programming. You also need to work on your basslines.

Get your chops sequence right first. Then add some slight/delay reverb so the chops flow together. Make sure you use some filters too. Your samples are taking up too much of your frequency range. It's a little muddy. After that get your bassline right. From there add your drums. The bassline/chops will tell you where everything needs to go.


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pwd pwd is offline
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not very good, but i think you could make it better. you do have so good stuff though.


pretty much what the others said.
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ik1 ik1 is offline
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a few things i noticed:

1) you have a great ear for samples
2) always start a sample on a place a hat would sound (generally)
3) dont can too many bass kick / toms in the same place... it makes it sound crowded!! you could solve this by giving your whole track a tiny reverb on the master of the mixer (i just wouldnt do it)

but u have potential
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MccM6 MccM6 is offline
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That "anos" joint is fire.
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West los West los is offline
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yea man that anos one is really nice u flipped it different than jedi mind tricks
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jdizz7420 jdizz7420 is offline
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samples hot, beat is WAAACK, haha i couldnt even listen to it...and the only reason im sayin that is cause i listend to the rest of ur stuff and sum of it (anos) is heat. just scrap that beat chop the sample again and lay sum drums that flow. ull be good
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Buckward Buckward is offline
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i agree with the rest...i see what you're trying to do...just go back to the lap and re-cut that b/c its an ill sample
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