Starters they are all off beat like a mutha.

2. they sound generic and lifeless

3. That biggie flip is very annoying and most would prolly not listen because of the intro. Same for the 4th beat on ya page.

Mainly you just gotta keep at big homie. Ya stuff sounds horrible now but most everyone sounds terrible in the Alpha stage.

Oh and I hope to god that you just started like a month ago cus if not then.....well.....then keep doing you but keep this as a hobby.

Im usually not this harsh but Im tired and its late.