spyda the drums need rythum, like a "boom" "bap" "boom" "boom" "bap". your drums where all over the place but thats aight its part of learning.
and your samples need to be chopped better. I would say go research RZA, Pete Rock, 9th wonder, Heat Makerz n Jus Blaze also Kanye, also go to youtube and type in kev brown on the MPC as a matter of fact here it is http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iHOXXsu4ehc listen and watch wat he does you dont have to have a mpc to create this sound. jus watch, listen, and learn. listen to how his samples are chopped.....