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Ripp Ripp is offline
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here we go... beat.. beat....

Situation run from the same thing over
and over like a game only a few play now
a' days its hard to pick em up or raise your
odds to win, raise your chin up, count your sins,
write a whole book, cover the grins off your judges,
those who judge you can suck your dick with chocolate
fudge and, everything you ever did is bad, not really
you jus don't wana be a fag, so you fake it, break
your freedo, make it look sad, thats your life you
invented, Robotic logic to the structure you surrended,
Obligated to the wroung, might make your life long,
but not so happy thats why you write this song, or any
song full'a blues like they call it, frustrated with life
like the whole world keep forgettin its all in our brain,
some people live in sewer, some rise up to fame but
all together they all feel nuthins enough, for the poor
needs more trash and the rich just more cash, where
da love at we forget to ask, rescue mission should be put out to the task. lets save this world like them two cartoon rats or just take over the whole earth and make it go blast.
A-wal**:eek:
12-24-2001
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Ripp Ripp is offline
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can't stop can't stop.....

Operation freedom XXX, hornygraphicaly defined,
les just put it to the test. if every woman accepts, gonna
be no one to arrest, then freedom will cover or uncover
for this matter what really makes you stumble makin
******* feel flatterred..// oh oh wait hold on, kinda got
off track, that ain't what i was goin for, makin all the
women look like hoes, **** that, billion years would
take a world like that to find, i'talkin bout freedom of the
mind, so imaginate, collaborate, make your style up
and spit on those who brag on it. And you find your friends
being punk *** flakes, **** em all remember, you be
making the dates, schedule reality to your benefit,
wait for no lil' flakes, you the jury of their life, you control
their fate, Chit chatters i hate, they just an inside rate
for me, a scale i use to pick freely, them ones who
score equally to my beliefs, good people that give you
down to earth **** and not decieve, feel hella reliefed
and then together prepare your own system, take your
own risks, write your own sequence, flow wit da frequence
and if you out, you can suck my penis or pray for your
life, knock on some wood, or just go bout your way
cause after all you live in a free world.
12-24-2001
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PlaTiNumNEEDleZ PlaTiNumNEEDleZ is offline
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i think your rap sucked ur penis

i aint feeln it

scratching is difficult with PLATINUM NEEDLEZ

12-25-2001
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Trouble Trouble is offline
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naaa It aint bad, u didnt structure it properly but there were some good lines.It was basically a good rant , but you spolied it with constant references to your penis.

She saw me come over her hour glass body, she had problems with drinking milk and being school tardy. She'll loan you her toothbrush, she'll bar tend your party....(KOL)

12-27-2001
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LILMillay LILMillay is offline
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bust a freestyle and will battle holla back make your rhyme tight i don't mess wit petty s**t
01-06-2002
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flareward flareward is offline
2,507 posts, I dare you!!!!!!
 
 
asking katz to peep but i didn't see sh-t/
only spoke one line and ya already talking sh-t/
telling katz to buss 1st so you can study flows/that style reminds of stanky crack ho's/
ya name reflects ya style/cause you a little league nigga/
have to walk on slilts to make yaself look bigger/
if ya wanna battle katz/then post that sh-t/
or download some MP3's if ya mind ain't equipped/
study this quick verse and then come harder/i call you son/
because i am ya father.

Now go tidy up ya room Bit-h!!!!


out.

FlareWard.


I've never seen a ***** smart enuff to use a personal computer, never mind a mackentosh!!! - Uncle Ruckus

01-06-2002
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thadon41 thadon41 is offline
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BUT ..


From spending nights lone then not then back again
sh-t aint easy gotta have mental strength of 10 men
So atleast have the courtesy to admit it when your wrong
Hit u with lines u didnt expect now you like 'whats going on'
Pretty boy package bring it but be ready for disapointment
Coz in this rap game sh-t you know you aint dilegent
you know pain is my lyrical stimulant so whats yours
I hate you know coz you trying to preach to us the laws
Weather recorded or unplugged you just bring the same sh-t
After I bust this, Im gone add you to my blacklist
Ya rhymes get brought like you was still in nursery skool
Weather you beleive this or not you know thees words I bring are true

01-06-2002
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Ripp Ripp is offline
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while u splittin g's/ i'm cookin z's/ weighin pounds on a
national scale/ when it comes to trees i be supreme
like da whale/ king of the sea/ i'm da king of my network/
used freely by fishies - narks will be well cooked/ like sharks rolled up in sushies/ served at one a' my covers hooked //up in china town/ Chinese cuisin always down wid my percentage/ Italian fuxks to hard
to manage/ filled greed like greece filled pizzas/ grab
yo handfule when you give them a finga/ raise the price
won't choose you over the trigga/ but for me is da emphasize principle-
distribute freedom to the stressful/ or them free people
medicinaly grateful to gods creation on da land/ greens
make money make greed make trennddss a' voilents/ contradicting
the art of Cheeba finance/ A constitutional statement that
came out/ i dunno why it was made up/ but the point has already came out/ and layed down - the figure/ the table
of my mathematical profit/ principles that paid off like a spiritual habit/ it was in our hands, we already had it/ and
how many times we lost it/ on and off like a fosit/ we come
through or come bunk-straight up/ broke, soked razors of pleasure
donate'd by smack(junk)/ all cash is gone/once again
in another hole caved in, head overthrown/ no friends
to save ya/ life s'like a'wave, positions that change ya/
its nature/ one day ahead a'the game/ then you fall, but
soon recycle like rain and once again stand tall/ with a
lil less brain.............. DAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMmmm

wwhew peace!.
01-07-2002
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Dirty Denzzy Dirty Denzzy is offline
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Time spent in a camp of concentration
listening to voices of pain n' devistation
I clear tha path without any hesitation
I gotta keep pace for the prisoners excaping
taking what's mine n' leaving u this
I release intelligence with sinful bliss
A kiss of death inscribed with pain
cocaine injected leaving them insane
they love to forget but maintain the same
they live their lives with a cavity in tha brain
salvation will come like a down pour of rain
the world will stop n' time will be deleted
Hell will freeze over n' tha gods will be defeated
Judgement day will come n' ya crucifix will de needed
I live day to day with thoughts of tha past
stress balls cause the elderly ta have heart attacks
what this world lacks is love n' paitience
I got no paitience for these worthless racists
Haters of tha world who ruin a nation
I see too many teens with death contimplation
I see drugs nightmearing tha dreams we chasin'!

Ridding tha world of terror using types of horror
I see pain in the eyes of victims over tha border
I try to realize this is our reality
this is tha world we live in, this is our tradgedy
we discuss rights n' wrongs n' our retaliations
why can't we embrace to be one Nation
just like n' ill hip hop colaboration
From peacefullness to tha towers devistation
Twins collapsed with terror navigation
Live your lives to tha fullest
tell ya people so they will know this
we gotta make voices heard to protect our existence
Slef destruction of our earth we can't perdict this.

DIrty D

01-07-2002
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Trouble Trouble is offline
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Dirty I really really digged that, phat stuff!!

Ripp that was cool too, you got as different edge to ya, probably in that I didnt understand alot of that but you got skillz!!

Where are all these new cats comin from?

She saw me come over her hour glass body, she had problems with drinking milk and being school tardy. She'll loan you her toothbrush, she'll bar tend your party....(KOL)

01-08-2002
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