I need somne help writing a rap song for my band. it cant be explicit lyrics or about ne like drugs etc. and you have to be willing to let us put it on a cd post away!!!!!
i cant rap worth a crap
i like to wear a red baseball cap
im like a big mac
showin my stuff up in your game
like a umm car
damn yo..thats pretty harsh
so ur jus layin it down sayin pretty much all rap sux
when u prob have never even listened to any of da good ****
dilated peoples for one..the r ill as hell
they iz tonz of good ****..if u sit down to listen to it
Biggest problem in writing a rhyme that works is ultimately you have to have something to say.
But you also have to understand rhythm, alliteration, and rhyme structures.
And it doesn't hurt to be able to sling the occasional metaphor or simile. There's nothing fancy about the words "float like a butterfly, sting like a bee" -- but they have power and aesthetic elegance.
i cant rap worth a crap
TK
