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hey guys haven't been on the forums, just got a new set up and wanted to test it out. heres a song a i used to mess around with it
hope you guys like

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...songID=8296163

lyrics:


chicken chicken (baka)
your a chicken chicken (baka)
hes a chicken chicken (baka)
(baka) chicken

it feels like someone spat in my stomach
**** makes me sick to my stomach
i listen to these messages
and its just gets me so pissed from it
i scrummaged to get what ever have stashed
inside of my covert
ima have to have a few bags of hash
or ill ****ing flip ill be buggin
you'll see me around six in the morning
with tank of gas
outside of this kids house with this ****ing match
ready to burn this **** down
i dont care
if hes there
i dont care what you think
understand
im one eigth of mile
from killing this kid
i dont care whos there to watch u in this town
as these kids run around
moms and dads are no wheres to be found
wtf/
he could scream all we wants
once he gives up
thats when hes getting his **** bust
**** this **** you think tuff
stiffin up that upper lip
cuz thats the one im gunna hit
ill have you dumped
on the pavement
take picture take more pictures
and save them
devasted everyones y's every1 devasted
let everyone see him
see em with his ****ing face split
see em with his ****ing face lift
lifted so high his eyes
seemed to have caved in
look seee hes asian
i hate him i really hate him i do
and every friend that
has been a fiend of him
i hate em too
have my fist connect to his whole set
like im gunna do
i call them all out come down
i live in shirley head down south
mastic is hair bit right there you cant
miss it
trust me ill be found
im not gone be there
if you make it here
will make it fare
see there will be
more then jsut me
you'll see
everyone who lives here on this streets which means
your gunna need a pretty big army
if you try to come harm me
with a little bit of kids
who really dont give a ****
to bitched to even
throw a fist
come on come on
im armed with a mega bomb
your egging me on
lay it on
everyone who sayings
this is a satan song
whan im satan spawn
must being it on
so i can bring on
bring eveyone you brothers
your sisters your father
**** it your mom
who ever you know
you know there all gunna be gone
see your a ****ing chicken
to chick **** to bare arms
thats why im given you this song
to play on and on
chicken chicken (baka)
your a chicken chicken (baka)
hes a chicken chicken (baka)
(baka) chicken

(baka) chicken
(baka)
there goes
one chicken
two chicken
3 chicken
four
how many more chickens
am i see
ive then seen all of these before
like chicken 5 and chicken 4
one chicken two chickens
enter into to the store
and only one walk out witta coarse
it goes
one chicken
two chicken
3 chicken
four
how many more chickens
am i see
ive then seen all of these before
like chicken 5 and chicken 4
one chicken two chickens
enter into to the store
and only one walk out witta coarse

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wow i would have thought someone would have post something by now haha

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E.T. Science E.T. Science is offline
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Hey man, where you been? Haven't seen you around in awhile.

I really like this track. The only problem I have with it that it in its entirety sounds too much like an eminem track. The beat and delivery and flow and everything, even the chorus. It reminds me of a particular eminem track but I can't remember which one.

Otherwise it's nice, except for the 8th line going way off beat.

-E.

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that made me laught idk haha thnx bro yea no ive just been doing alot of things outside of the forums, just got a new computer which im using for the time being that does not crash until i get a mac. so i figured eh why not test this out, lets just put it this way. while making this cubase froze up 9 out or 10 times hah so yea im gunna get a new computer when i get a new job =[ how about you how are you doing? and my bad about the way it sounds that just the way i flowed to the beat

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that made me laught idk haha thnx bro yea no ive just been doing alot of things outside of the forums, just got a new computer which im using for the time being that does not crash until i get a mac. so i figured eh why not test this out, lets just put it this way. while making this cubase froze up 9 out or 10 times hah so yea im gunna get a new computer when i get a new job =[ how about you how are you doing? and my bad about the way it sounds that just the way i flowed to the beat
I've been well, just launched my website and trying to get this ghostwriting thing going full speed ahead. It's going pretty well so far.

-E.

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Man you got an intricate flow style man, I like that...
On certain parts it got really low, and I had to strain to hear it, but i understand with issues that I have that you can't get perfect audio with a bad set-up.

I like the idea.
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waaaaaaaaasuuupp doomz long time homie! i liked this track and e.t. has a point u do sound eminemish lol. overall good track and i feel ya on the computer problems

When All Is Said Reppin tha 1504 2024

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I've been well, just launched my website and trying to get this ghostwriting thing going full speed ahead. It's going pretty well so far.

-E.
nice congrats youve always talked about ghost writing for $$ whats the url to your site??


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Man you got an intricate flow style man, I like that...
On certain parts it got really low, and I had to strain to hear it, but i understand with issues that I have that you can't get perfect audio with a bad set-up.

I like the idea.
haha thanks bro i love the feedback yea this computer is good cubase dont like it as much lol but overall thanx man appreciate it


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waaaaaaaaasuuupp doomz long time homie! i liked this track and e.t. has a point u do sound eminemish lol. overall good track and i feel ya on the computer problems
BROOO whats goood!!! hows it been word im glad you like =] im sorry bout the flow haha u guys make it sound like eminem is a bad rapper haha but yea ive been listening to his old **** a lot i guess i got to use to it and it started to grow on me. im srry ill try to stop it but it just feels SOO GOOD!!!! lol

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The link to my site is www.freelancelyrics.com (it's also in my sig... click on the picture.)

As far as the flow, it's not that it was bad, it's just it can be dangerous to emulate another rapper's style so closely.

-E.

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