well im working on a commercial beat i think the beat is just ok at this point, and i think its a little to "loopy" at this point in time. also i have a weird felling about the kicks, bass, clap, and snare like some times i like them and some times i dont. i think just the three patterns and sounds i did should stay and then you can add your own kicks, bass, snare ect ect and some more patterns to "fill it up". i can send u a mp3 and then send you the wav files when you want. just hit me up on fp and let me know