Hi to everyone here as this is my first post. Ive been dabbling a bit into making songs and after a long time, ive managed to finish it. Im just looking for any general feedback, or any tips to make it better. My headphones suck like garbage, so let me know if it may sound weird coming from high-grade stuff but I dont know.

It seems I cant post links so just go to a random youtube vid and replace everything after the watch?v= with this:

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I was planning to upload the mp3 but stuff happened and im away from my computer for a while.