Akai mpc 1000 hip hop beat

[rythmatical]

lol thanks pump and assassin i tried to be original with something.

[Sunny Winters]

nice

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[InVision]

great work man. i love the drums and the sample was dope. joint had me on my neck.

[iBoBo]

cot damn...joint was fire...i feel like im wasting my time making beats w.out an mpc lol

[PinkytheBrains]

it's pretty monotonous, i know it is supposed to loop but something need to be changed from time to time..

lemme explain you this..
there is a state in your head, that i like to call mind-****..that is when you're listening to something, and it goes...and suddenly you tear it up with some brutal breakdown that your ear really liked..that is mind-****..don't get me wrong, beat is great, it's just kinda boring, that's it.. you can fix it

i hope i helped you ..



(you said to criticise you.. )

yeh man...thats what you need...some break down...some boogah boo gat - DIBITY BEE BOP BOOM BOOM BANG! - GET FUNKY WITH IT ..BAH BAH BAH BAH BAH WOOO... ..yah dig?

and no wonder your girl dumped you leaving beer bottles on the carpet...*tisk tisk* hahahah

jp man don't take it to heart
good work