How to make this track better?

[Pumpthrust]

Also, make your harmony longer than four beats per measure. Try extending it to 2 measures so that it doesn't get too boring. Also, variation doesn't have to just be about the drums. I would also make the your harmony vary, like make the next two bars the same as the previous, but with a subtle yet perceivable variation. You don't want your tracks to sound like 1 bar looped over and over again.

[Happy Beats]

variety dude...sounds, transitions, better quality samples, all that jazz

[acetheface954]

The thing is, the people I like aren't making chart topping music. I'm more of an underground music guy, I don't tend to listen to that many mainstream chart topping songs because I have a very niche style of music I like. Almost all of it sounds aggressive. Some of the artists I like are Hollywood Undead, Deuce, the whole Shady/Aftermath roster, Skillet, Linkin Park, Chamillionaire, Richy Nix, Fort Minor, etc etc etc. That's not to say I don't want to make chart topping music but I would do in a similar fashion to Eminem in his prime if I ever got that far.

shoot that's cool. just because a person isn't current or popular doesn't mean you can't learn from them. i even got helpful tips from newbies on new stuff that has come out. anyways what i'm saying is just learn from your favorites or whoever out there inspires you so that you may come up with your own style. its one of the best ways to get practice.