How to get better sweeps

[matthewm77]

I have a white noise sweep but it doesnt sound that good, I notice in some songs that after it builds up it sort of splashes out and sounds really nice but when I try that it just sounds wrong. You can hear it here Roald Velden - Dreaming Away (Original Mix) FREE - YouTube

 

[steffeeh]

Audio example of your attempt?

 

[matthewm77]

Audio example of your attempt?

I could post the FLP, do you FL Studio?

 

[steffeeh]

Mp3 would be much quicker

 

[bandcoach]

just the audio will do it lets everyone who knows something about sound design to offer advice