you're off to a decent start. it's not really my cup of tea but I'll try to give you some constructive crit. The bassline wasn't very funky, it does sound in key but it's just kind of "blah"...the sound itself isn't very inspiring. I do like the guitar sound. The drum sounds are "ok" but the programming is too simplistic for my taste (but that's a taste thing, maybe you did that on purpose). Also I find the padish synth sound to be cheesy. Finally I'm not listening on a real system but it sounds like you need to do some work on your levels, seemed kind of quiet. keep up the hard work.