A Real Composition

hey thats pretty good. check out mine on my myspace, its called prolusio.
 
Sorry, I crticize a lot but I'm only trying to help you. The beat's a little repetive.. trying playing it with a different rythym, switch the melody more. To me, it sounds like you are a beginner pianist. Keep working on it and you'll get better. The overall vibe is great its just something about the rythym that needs work. Change it up and be creative with it it can be a good song. I'm not gonna bother with the lyrics.
 
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