Not sure about this composition, feedback please.

[Ferdows]

Hi guys,

So I made this original track, but im not sure about the composition, is this good enough or can it use some improvement?

heres the private link:

https://soundcloud.com/ferdows/high-on-luv-1/s-YLc0n

Can you guys give feedback on it please?

Thanks

 

[JulienAugustus]

Maybe better luck in Feedback thread. I tried to checj the tune it was removed