my first time

[UNDERGROUND MELODIEZ]

this is my first time composing/making the melody on the beat... i usually sample..and i did this on my MPD16, jus came yesterday...tell me wat u think!

*the hook drops first*

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[Nueve_19]

I'm feelin the melody and all that, but the quality needs a lil work, maybe work on the drums. mix em and blend it to the melody...then change up the melody a lil bit at some parts. add some elements coz it sounds so repetitive...but overall good job...just need to werk on the quality and it'll be fine