just mix your tracks a little better and you'll be sorted. imo, the kick is a little too dominant in the mix, try pulling it back in the mix, also the sounds your using are all fighting for space, and to be honest the lead synth is a big 'weedy', try using some portamento on that and put some reeverb over it and bring it into the mix a bit, this is a sound which dre use's a lot. just keep on doing what your doin, the only thing really lacking is the mix itself, your ideas are spot on, the mixing thing will come to you eventually
