Composition

[Pressurebox]

been on FP for a while,
and I just wanted ton know from fellow producers how i can improve my sound.
my latest project is

Ballad of Broken Hearts by Pressurebox Jones on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
I tried to put out my version of donuts.

I've been making beats for A while and I feel I'm close to being at a good level.
Any suggestions on how I can re-tool and improve my sound will be
greatly appreciated, thank you

 

[Zee one]

I really like this.. I'm listening to it on my iPhone so I only noticed one thing I would do different. This is just a personal preference, but the drum patter is a bit too predictable, I would give it a more spacey feel and maybe replace some of the drum hits with light snare hits if that makes sense. Really good feel though

 

[Pressurebox]

I really like this.. I'm listening to it on my iPhone so I only noticed one thing I would do different. This is just a personal preference, but the drum patter is a bit too predictable, I would give it a more spacey feel and maybe replace some of the drum hits with light snare hits if that makes sense. Really good feel though

thx man, appreciate the input