Thanks bro. Anyone else?
Thanks bro. Anyone else?
Thanks Crack. Anyone want a friendly battle?
yea sure im up for one.
i aint got a mic so
let me throw-this-in-text
talking bout you back
when no one no-ticed-you-left
emcsquared, but hardly an ein-stein
i-decline that your rhyme-design
could ride-aside the likes-of-mine
your one i never noticed-rapping
bones-r-snapping when i give bros-a-spanking
im the bull or the mendozer(bulldozer :S)
if you wanna get friendly i geuss you want me to bend-over
mite-i-take-a look at why-guys-hate-ya
its cos *cummin in a cats back* aint right-by-na-ture
a bunch a bullsh1t is all-that-he-said
making false claims i shud be calling-the feds
oh and red&white he didnt kill it......it was al-ready-dead
go 4 it bruv
edited for swearing
Last edited by mc.majik; 12-07-2006 at 07:51 AM.
Alright i posted my 16 but i guess it never got on here somehow. I didn't notice til now so here's a hot verse for ya.
I asked for a battle this isnít for kids/
draw ur outline in chalk and ill be over in a minute/
forget it get some rope tie urself down outback/
Iím a train . . . welcome to my soundtrack/
Now hereís a serious sprinkle of lyrical miracles/
Write up ur burial and spiral it through ur stereo/
Iím serious tho I joke, itís kinda contradictory/
like you takin the mic and talking bigger than me/
ur not sicker than me Iím iller than anthrax/
crammed in ur spandex, ya scratch that Iím in ur asscrack/
itís a ruger wedgy, haha u can hardly speak now/
its cuz ur too busy tryin to pull a piece out/
eat these sixteen bars let em polish that face/
leave you seein more stars than a hard rock cafť/
I regressar, and ya you vanish in Spanish/
You wanna know my secret? I canít tell you . . . itís magic/
fo-cus-cun7, like a spliff im bout to smoke-him-up
your boas-ting-but your verse was so wack the site wudnt post-it-up
1 word rhyme schemes, u need a hard-slap
im in the fast-track whereas your last-chat...wud get laughed-at
bust-colder-and u aint tuff enuff to brush-shoulders-man
kinda stupid calling me 'lil' when u dunno how old-i-am
cops at my yard asking-who-fell-vitcim
they know i cant help it i got more passion-than-mel-gibson
this the cards i got dont be mad-i-got-dealt-these
i laugh when-i-tell-g's of your lack-of-multi's
and if......... actually wait.....
my verse killed urs, i dont need another. lol.
try to use more more multis rather than the last word only rhyme scheme
*edited for swearing.damnit.
Last edited by mc.majik; 12-11-2006 at 01:47 AM.
AWWW MAN your "Anthrax Wedgy" lines were sickness LoL....
ah man sorry magik, but multi's aren't the biggest part of a hot verse....
i agree substance is required to make a verse good, but so is multis imo anyway, multis incorperated into a meaningful verse is ace.
Thanks Red I appreciate the support! mc. majik you had some good verses, but I feel like I had some multi's in there. Anyways anyone else? Who's next?
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