You didn't forget me

[EmCsquared]

Thanks bro. Anyone else?

[CrAcKa-JaCk]

Emcee, liked both the spits you had here. glad to see you back. I havent really been active lately, been pretty busy with business and such.

keep it up

PS: I spit a new free in that "Anyone wanna spit" thread that's around here. check it out.

[EmCsquared]

Thanks Crack. Anyone want a friendly battle?

[mc.majik]

yea sure im up for one.
lets see......

i aint got a mic so
let me throw-this-in-text
talking bout you back
when no one no-ticed-you-left
emcsquared, but hardly an ein-stein
i-decline that your rhyme-design
could ride-aside the likes-of-mine
your one i never noticed-rapping
bones-r-snapping when i give bros-a-spanking
im the bull or the mendozer(bulldozer :S)
if you wanna get friendly i geuss you want me to bend-over
mite-i-take-a look at why-guys-hate-ya
its cos *cummin in a cats back* aint right-by-na-ture
a bunch a bullsh1t is all-that-he-said
making false claims i shud be calling-the feds
oh and red&white he didnt kill it......it was al-ready-dead

go 4 it bruv

edited for swearing

[EmCsquared]

Alright i posted my 16 but i guess it never got on here somehow. I didn't notice til now so here's a hot verse for ya.

Lil homey,
I asked for a battle this isn’t for kids/
draw ur outline in chalk and ill be over in a minute/
forget it get some rope tie urself down outback/
I’m a train . . . welcome to my soundtrack/
Now here’s a serious sprinkle of lyrical miracles/
Write up ur burial and spiral it through ur stereo/
I’m serious tho I joke, it’s kinda contradictory/
like you takin the mic and talking bigger than me/
ur not sicker than me I’m iller than anthrax/
crammed in ur spandex, ya scratch that I’m in ur asscrack/
it’s a ruger wedgy, haha u can hardly speak now/
its cuz ur too busy tryin to pull a piece out/
eat these sixteen bars let em polish that face/
leave you seein more stars than a hard rock café/
I regressar, and ya you vanish in Spanish/
You wanna know my secret? I can’t tell you . . . it’s magic/

[mc.majik]

fo-cus-cun7, like a spliff im bout to smoke-him-up
your boas-ting-but your verse was so wack the site wudnt post-it-up
1 word rhyme schemes, u need a hard-slap
im in the fast-track whereas your last-chat...wud get laughed-at
bust-colder-and u aint tuff enuff to brush-shoulders-man
kinda stupid calling me 'lil' when u dunno how old-i-am
cops at my yard asking-who-fell-vitcim
they know i cant help it i got more passion-than-mel-gibson
this the cards i got dont be mad-i-got-dealt-these
i laugh when-i-tell-g's of your lack-of-multi's
and if......... actually wait.....
my verse killed urs, i dont need another. lol.

try to use more more multis rather than the last word only rhyme scheme

safe

*edited for swearing.damnit.

[Red & WhiTe]

AWWW MAN your "Anthrax Wedgy" lines were sickness LoL....
ah man sorry magik, but multi's aren't the biggest part of a hot verse....

[mc.majik]

i agree substance is required to make a verse good, but so is multis imo anyway, multis incorperated into a meaningful verse is ace.

safe.

[EmCsquared]

Thanks Red I appreciate the support! mc. majik you had some good verses, but I feel like I had some multi's in there. Anyways anyone else? Who's next?