Tell Me Wut you Think, Please

**M.M. (ms. maestro)** · 09-23-2005

Some things that bother me...decided to express it. Nothing personal. Decided to look out the eyes of different people and how they feel please resopnd. If its good, or it suck, tell me.

Killin me killin you/we need to be schooled/look at at the sky what color is it? you know its not blue/its red/from the blood that my brother have bled/from the hatred/wake up in the morning get outta bed/walk down the street---scared holdin my my peice/honky lookin at me like I fend ta shoot up his Jeep/cuz' i'm black holding two little lines that make a cross/its the only thing i hold when all my hope is lost/my brother was nailed to the exact same thang/betrayed and forced to die up high in the rain/he did nothin worng but still chose/to hate hime but 3 days later the homie still rose/another brother took concrete and grew a beautiful rose/while the in the club is out throwin elbows/having fun step out the club and there's a gun/pointed in his face but can't run there is no place/off in a car wit blue lights so what's the cahrge?/being black is enough get behind the bars/wanna go to school to further my education/nothing's changed emancipation proclaimation/4.0 GPA and high SAT scores/but still can't get in because they "out of room and board"/the minimum wage pays no more than 6 dollas/gotta think of a way to get money less harder/cuz life is harder tryin to raise a son and daughter/but if I sell some rocks i can move out tha projects/my kids can live and have dreams of their own/then they wont have to go back home and sell stones/But i never imagined that things turned out this way/money commin cray fast, 20Gs a day/gotta watch out for n----s that wanna start wars/cuz them n----s'will rob you down to ya dirty drarws/i hate greedy n----s, only get whah you need/cuz in the that excess'll bring you down to ya knees/and then its gone/what else is wrong walking up the street/my sister in line buying the medicine she needs/wit her son/doctor said they gotta few years to run/but AIDS aint nothin but a nigga wit a gun/he came out the club, locked up same night/got that sentence charge, took 10 years outta of his life/when he gets out he goes home to meet his faithful wife/they make rough love all the way through the night/never mentioned one time that he's an undercover fag/2 months later gotta kid that's really his/but he got sick so the mother though he had/a cold or the flu at least that's what she thinks it is/but the doctor had said he's HIV positive/she fell to her knees cuz then she knew she had it too/all cuz that n---- went and f---ed some n----'s stool/their breaths are precious cuz she knows their time is short/but to escape form this world is like a dream of some sort/we blame the white man, yes a part of that is true/but insted of helping ourselves we're killin me killin you.

...TO BE CONTINUED...

**CrAcKa-JaCk** · 09-23-2005

hmm... i kinda like that, i feel that topic... real stuff... views may be a lil askew as to some of the beliefs we all share, but hey, it's all the same in my eyes...

keep it up and keep ya head up

**M.M. (ms. maestro)** · 09-23-2005

thanks, i will keep at it

**CoolCrazyCuteGrl** · 09-23-2005

its really good i like it, keep postin i look forword to readin more!

**Wack** · 09-23-2005

wens part 2 comin??

**MNK_D.S.** · 09-29-2005

damn, i liked it. real shyt, discussed hardship and struggles of daily life in ite purest wholest form. not just selling drugs and making money like how some glorify and glamourize it, but as a result of hard life HAVING to stoop to that element. very nice, strayed a little towards the middle of it, but you picked up strong at the end. keep it up.