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    im like a fly im always on some hip hop sh!t
    like a hillbilly wit a mouth full of chew ready to spit

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    im like a pelvis on a pogo im hip hop

    ^ok they cant all be good
    so many punches my fists hurt so before you spit words
    in a diss verse, know that ill air you out like big lurch
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    just cuz you sample sh!t without choppin is past age u a looper
    step ya game up ahead of time and be a futureproducer

    just a quick one i thought of lol

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    welcome to school children, im teaching verbal-classes
    if ya cant see im ballin then you need erkel-glasses
    matter of fact, my facts reach the masses
    hip hop aint dead man so forget the caskets
    my verbal skills are straight so forget these fagots
    my punchlines are funnier than a basket of bob sagets
    written classics, deeper than your moms baggage
    i just speak my mind, what the F*** is a metaphore?
    my style aint easy like the neighborhood rent-a-whore

    ok im tired and im done

    that was a keystyle. and i know i dont spell good haha
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    lol that was funny dawg,good ones

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    always on point like decimal, i change it up
    like your extent to the power of two i claims the top

    haha...next time i tell you!!!

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    alot of these punchlines are too basic or too complex

    my verbal skills are straight so forget these fagots <- too basic

    there are others were peoples trying to do to much within a small amount of bars

    just some feedback
    so many punches my fists hurt so before you spit words
    in a diss verse, know that ill air you out like big lurch
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    ^old ish, new site coming soon

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    hey im teaching this school kids, thats why im sticking to basics
    somebody's having a hard time seeing, somebody get him lasek
    my verses are hair cuz theyre just off the top of my head
    so when my punches suck, i nut and say "get outta my bed"
    detention for everybody, yalls rhyme patterns are timed out
    like a dr suess book i think these kids are all rhymed out
    dont be a bedwetter about keystyles and get pissed
    class is over for now............ yall kids are dismissed
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    Quote Originally Posted by zazulak44
    my verses are hair cuz theyre just off the top of my head
    so when my punches suck, i nut and say "get outta my bed"
    best line IMO, i liked it a lot
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    most of the time the raps i make are hot
    but if im whackest its cos i masturbate alot

    ^LOL WTF
    so many punches my fists hurt so before you spit words
    in a diss verse, know that ill air you out like big lurch
    [URL="http://www.slicethepie.com/Music/ViewArtistProfile.aspx?id=5103&tid=14152&tidx=1"]http://www.slicethepie.com/Music/ViewArtistProfile.aspx?id=5103&tid=14152&tidx=1[/URL]
    [URL="http://www.myspace.com/dastardthebarstood"]www.myspace.com/dastardthebarstood[/URL]
    [URL="http://www.soundclick.com/slashthebutcher"]www.soundclick.com/slashthebutcher[/URL]
    ^old ish, new site coming soon

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