Olie
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Here's some story telling type lyrics for you:
I couldn't choose my beginning
But I’ll choose my ending
I grew heavy from resenting
But still flew with lead wings
My future’s impending
But I'm glued to my bedding
Turning blue regretting
A truth worth forgetting
I'm through ascending
I'm a recluse intending
A ruthless heading
I fall to a new setting
I view Satan trembling
I Loosen hells gate and get in
I noose then behead him
I move in to skin him
State you lose, his head grins
Says the clue’s in the threading
I wake in a sweat with
A blood soaked sheet clinging
I'm on an iceberg spinning
And the ice keeps thinning
I consider to flee swimming
But first I look at the linen
There’s blood patterns left in it
I make out the words she’s winning
Everything stops spinning
The ice cracks flinging
Me into someone’s wedding
The bride’s clothes start shedding
I put a knife to her neck with
Intent to make blood red it
But the crowd ain't fretting
I was thinking of expanding it into a full song, with the second and third part of the dream having it's own verse so i can go into much more detail. I also need to add some sort of conclusion to wrap it up so it makes sense at the end.
Yay or nay?
Edit: also is the whole waking up but still dreaming bit too much? Seriously damn inception for ruining being able to use that.
I couldn't choose my beginning
But I’ll choose my ending
I grew heavy from resenting
But still flew with lead wings
My future’s impending
But I'm glued to my bedding
Turning blue regretting
A truth worth forgetting
I'm through ascending
I'm a recluse intending
A ruthless heading
I fall to a new setting
I view Satan trembling
I Loosen hells gate and get in
I noose then behead him
I move in to skin him
State you lose, his head grins
Says the clue’s in the threading
I wake in a sweat with
A blood soaked sheet clinging
I'm on an iceberg spinning
And the ice keeps thinning
I consider to flee swimming
But first I look at the linen
There’s blood patterns left in it
I make out the words she’s winning
Everything stops spinning
The ice cracks flinging
Me into someone’s wedding
The bride’s clothes start shedding
I put a knife to her neck with
Intent to make blood red it
But the crowd ain't fretting
I was thinking of expanding it into a full song, with the second and third part of the dream having it's own verse so i can go into much more detail. I also need to add some sort of conclusion to wrap it up so it makes sense at the end.
Yay or nay?
Edit: also is the whole waking up but still dreaming bit too much? Seriously damn inception for ruining being able to use that.
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