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    bbakerw0720 is offline Be Rightt
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    review on a hook please

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    this is the first hook ive ever written. idk if this shit is cheesy or not lol i just want some feedback please. it goes.

    tall girls, short girls, skinny girls.
    I- I got a thing for all the girls in the world.
    Ya, brown girls, white girls, red girls.
    I got a thing for, I, I got a thing for ‘em.

    its for this beat
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WqQq8p8x9tY
    if you could give me any feedback please id really appreciate it.

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    E.T. Science is offline Registered User
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    Honestly, I would have to hear it to pass any judgement. A hook is almost entirely dependent on the way in which it is delivered/produced.

    Good luck,

    -E.

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    bbakerw0720 is offline Be Rightt
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    oh aight well thanks for the feedback man. i appreciate it

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    orbit33190 is offline Registered User
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    peeped the beat, you should record the hook quick and re-post it. maybe change the "red girls" to "all girls" lol.

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