Okay so I put this song out earlier this year and I feel like it could've had more potential if I really would've mastered my vocals on the track. Also, I feel like I could have had more delivery, I kinda rushed releasing this song out to the public. I also think my last verse should be rewritten because I'm basically venting my heart out/bashing on other rappers, which I kinda regret because it doesn't even concord with the chorus and the true meaning of the song. I don't know, what do you guys think I should work on? Anything from criticism to compliments, if any, please leave honest feedback. Thanks!
It's Kevin G, I'm coming to you live like a concert,
all this energy you would of thought I was a monster,
Monstar, back in '96 against the all stars,
ball hard, no competition when I, switch my position,
Lil Kevin can rap oh now it's time to pay attention,
but like a 4th quarter foul let's take it to revision,
cuz to these rappers that I'm dissing I'm aiming and never missing,
complaining they never listen, to the music that you make,
your shit is fake man a couple hits give or take,
but when it breaks it gone shatter,
I'm climbing up the ladder if you're pissed hold your bladder, take a swing batter batter, but don't strike out,
cuz when I'm heating up the game, call a timeout,
I wonder if these rappers think they'll stick around,
like the hoe that wanted more after you dicked her down,
shit, keep ****ing hoes a good girl will come around
One day I'll get a college degree,
One day I'll get seen on the scene,
One day I'll get a,
One day I'll get away on a train,
One day I'll make the pain go away,
One day I'll make it,
One day I'll make it out with my team,
One day I'll get the girl of my dreams,
One day I'm gone,
One day I'm gone make it all happen,
But 'til then I'mma keep on rapping,
The hardest part is getting heard in my city,
cuz where I'm from people rap about them ******* and titties,
and all that shit is irrelevant, y'all just spit for the hell of it,
maybe I should dumb it down cuz my flow is intelligent,
I'm just saying, we're living in a deaf generation,
where nobody gives a shit like we dealing constipation,
lyrical medication trynna cure the whole nation,
if you're listening to this I'll consider you a patient,
now, the life we live is the effort we put toward success,
everybody's different but we deal the same stress,
so if you work hard and believe you'll achieve,
anything you ever dreamed, it's guaranteed
One day I'll get a college degree,
One day I'll get seen on the scene,
One day I'll get a,
One day I'll get away on a train,
One day I'll make the pain go away,
One day I'll make it,
One day I'll make it out with my team,
One day I'll get the girl of my dreams,
One day I'm gone,
One day I'm gone make it all happen,
But 'til then I'mma keep on rapping
Call me a dreamer but we're all the same,
it don't matter the complexion we got blood in our veins,
we have similar dreams we have similar brains,
others see with more color others see it more plain,
dang, enough with all this corny shit,
I'm just trynna tell you what the moral of the story is,
rappers nowadays rap about the same thang,
so maybe if I change I could make it in the game,
***** please, y'all suck like you're all up on your knees,
why the **** would I switch up when we got enough of these,
whack MCs rapping about ******* and cheese,
theres a hundred of you but there is only one of me,
damn, I don't think you understand how I feel,
swimming in a lake with fakes I'm too real,
what's the deal, all this effort with no recognition,
someday I'm gone make it but right now I have a vision,
and that vision is a mission just to spread a simple message,
for the ones that pay attention to the to the topics that I mention,
I bring up all these rappers it's the only way I vent it,
cuz really it just hurts to be honest I resent it,
knowing that my lyrics are written from the heart,
cuz I've been trynna show the people I've been real from the start,
from every word I write to the ending of this song,
so if you can relate then you should probably sing along like,
One day I'll get a college degree,
One day I'll get seen on the scene,
One day I'll get a,
One day I'll get away on a train,
One day I'll make the pain go away,
One day I'll make it,
One day I'll make it out with my team,
One day I'll get the girl of my dreams,
One day I'm gone,
One day I'm gone make it all happen,
But 'til then I'mma keep on rapping
It's Kevin G, I'm coming to you live like a concert,
all this energy you would of thought I was a monster,
Monstar, back in '96 against the all stars,
ball hard, no competition when I, switch my position,
Lil Kevin can rap oh now it's time to pay attention,
but like a 4th quarter foul let's take it to revision,
cuz to these rappers that I'm dissing I'm aiming and never missing,
complaining they never listen, to the music that you make,
your shit is fake man a couple hits give or take,
but when it breaks it gone shatter,
I'm climbing up the ladder if you're pissed hold your bladder, take a swing batter batter, but don't strike out,
cuz when I'm heating up the game, call a timeout,
I wonder if these rappers think they'll stick around,
like the hoe that wanted more after you dicked her down,
shit, keep ****ing hoes a good girl will come around
One day I'll get a college degree,
One day I'll get seen on the scene,
One day I'll get a,
One day I'll get away on a train,
One day I'll make the pain go away,
One day I'll make it,
One day I'll make it out with my team,
One day I'll get the girl of my dreams,
One day I'm gone,
One day I'm gone make it all happen,
But 'til then I'mma keep on rapping,
The hardest part is getting heard in my city,
cuz where I'm from people rap about them ******* and titties,
and all that shit is irrelevant, y'all just spit for the hell of it,
maybe I should dumb it down cuz my flow is intelligent,
I'm just saying, we're living in a deaf generation,
where nobody gives a shit like we dealing constipation,
lyrical medication trynna cure the whole nation,
if you're listening to this I'll consider you a patient,
now, the life we live is the effort we put toward success,
everybody's different but we deal the same stress,
so if you work hard and believe you'll achieve,
anything you ever dreamed, it's guaranteed
One day I'll get a college degree,
One day I'll get seen on the scene,
One day I'll get a,
One day I'll get away on a train,
One day I'll make the pain go away,
One day I'll make it,
One day I'll make it out with my team,
One day I'll get the girl of my dreams,
One day I'm gone,
One day I'm gone make it all happen,
But 'til then I'mma keep on rapping
Call me a dreamer but we're all the same,
it don't matter the complexion we got blood in our veins,
we have similar dreams we have similar brains,
others see with more color others see it more plain,
dang, enough with all this corny shit,
I'm just trynna tell you what the moral of the story is,
rappers nowadays rap about the same thang,
so maybe if I change I could make it in the game,
***** please, y'all suck like you're all up on your knees,
why the **** would I switch up when we got enough of these,
whack MCs rapping about ******* and cheese,
theres a hundred of you but there is only one of me,
damn, I don't think you understand how I feel,
swimming in a lake with fakes I'm too real,
what's the deal, all this effort with no recognition,
someday I'm gone make it but right now I have a vision,
and that vision is a mission just to spread a simple message,
for the ones that pay attention to the to the topics that I mention,
I bring up all these rappers it's the only way I vent it,
cuz really it just hurts to be honest I resent it,
knowing that my lyrics are written from the heart,
cuz I've been trynna show the people I've been real from the start,
from every word I write to the ending of this song,
so if you can relate then you should probably sing along like,
One day I'll get a college degree,
One day I'll get seen on the scene,
One day I'll get a,
One day I'll get away on a train,
One day I'll make the pain go away,
One day I'll make it,
One day I'll make it out with my team,
One day I'll get the girl of my dreams,
One day I'm gone,
One day I'm gone make it all happen,
But 'til then I'mma keep on rapping
