I was wondering if I could get some constructive feedback on my lyrics. I'm trying to create a solid foundation on a styles of poetry and word play that I want to make my own style. I'm sure somebody else has hopped on it though, but you get the idea.
The way I spit leaves me questioning if I'm a run dry/
From sunrise I think about the obstacles to come by/
Yet I run by them so easily/
I guess this whole endeavor ahead is just a piece of me/
It means to me, that success never comes in one size,
but doesn't fit all/
Its all held in the beholders eyes/
Whether its to be closed to god/
Close to broads, livin lifes full of suprise/
In a days worth of time/
I'm a bronchosauras, I leave these bars extinct/
Until I get bronchitis and my throat is soar as hell/
Couldn't afford to go to jail,
but I still commit crime when I sumbit rhymes through genocide/
I'd do more, but I got it on reserve.