aakalitkavi
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Just another day at the sacrifical altar...
My conscience was leaving me, and i cudnt halt her...
Neither could i fault her
Coz my life is altered
In a way, that my parents
Wish they had a daughter
As if their wish really matters
My dreams, well they daily shatter
All around the floor they're scattered
Their words, deep within my soul are battered
Down on ma knees, i lie pleading
On top'o ma voice, i cry screaming
Jets of tears, out ma eyes are streaming
Still they awe the show, while i lie there bleeding
They keep sayin life is short, hunch it!
Oppurtunities are rare, clunch it!
Complications are long, crunch it!
Well if their advice was a face, I'mma punch it!
Do they really think, thatI need that round of counselling?
Dont they already know, thatMy temper's gone off ceiling?
Damn, its hard to gulp these wordsDown my throat, **** its toncelling!
Its just that i hate them to the coreHONESTLY, no hard feelings!
Thats all i can say for now,
Just ending this show with a bow
To my seeds, like a plough
wait and watch, i'MMA ****'EM HOW?!
( i know these lines might sound pre-historic, but i have been cravin audience from a very long time....i hope i have reachd the right place in that case. Hit me as much as u can wid uh criticism first... I ll deal with appreciation later if my work deserves any. Fibgers crossed, coin's tossed )
RJV (aakalitkavi)
My conscience was leaving me, and i cudnt halt her...
Neither could i fault her
Coz my life is altered
In a way, that my parents
Wish they had a daughter
As if their wish really matters
My dreams, well they daily shatter
All around the floor they're scattered
Their words, deep within my soul are battered
Down on ma knees, i lie pleading
On top'o ma voice, i cry screaming
Jets of tears, out ma eyes are streaming
Still they awe the show, while i lie there bleeding
They keep sayin life is short, hunch it!
Oppurtunities are rare, clunch it!
Complications are long, crunch it!
Well if their advice was a face, I'mma punch it!
Do they really think, thatI need that round of counselling?
Dont they already know, thatMy temper's gone off ceiling?
Damn, its hard to gulp these wordsDown my throat, **** its toncelling!
Its just that i hate them to the coreHONESTLY, no hard feelings!
Thats all i can say for now,
Just ending this show with a bow
To my seeds, like a plough
wait and watch, i'MMA ****'EM HOW?!
( i know these lines might sound pre-historic, but i have been cravin audience from a very long time....i hope i have reachd the right place in that case. Hit me as much as u can wid uh criticism first... I ll deal with appreciation later if my work deserves any. Fibgers crossed, coin's tossed )
RJV (aakalitkavi)
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