Manifesto......

[iceberg760]

---just me on some bullshit again-----enjoy....
so it’s just me/john Muhammad busting shots from my Buick ~
blood clots leaking fluid ~ look, this is more than just music.
It’s more or less ~ certain folks I’m addressing, 12stepping~ my indiscretions
deep aggression starting to lessen, popping antidepressants.
Character assessment painting me as so unstable
knowing I’m incapable of separating the nonfiction fromfable.
Label me a recluse, excuse me~ just going through withdrawals
phone calls go unanswered, cancerous in my pitfall…8ball/
I keep shaking up/equating love with betrayel/closest katswanna see me fail
raining hail/longs walk on brimstone/postponing medetailing..my
real problems/a microcosm ~ of Angels & Goblins
oxycotin got me hittin the freeway bumping Phil Collins…
I’m outta options/truth be told ~ grown bored with thesmoking & drinking
now pouring my soul through an inkpen/sipping on Lipton ~eyes squinting.
As i flip through photo’s, Yaphet Kotto ~ thought I couldn’tget any darker
bad thoughts that I harbor/often times wanna die as a Martyr.
arguably ~ my artistry ~ is only parts of me that I want youto see
normally, the amount of I porn I see ~ is voiding out my warranty..

[binary_10essee]

I'm really diggin' this. I don't have much to offer for criticism but that's probably because I'm working on improving my own talent. I will say, however, that the very last line kind of threw it all off for me. Perhaps there is something I am missing so I don't understand it. But I just can't seem to make sense of it. Haha. But other than that (or if you can elaborate so I understand it), I'd love to hear it laid down on a track.

[iceberg760]

arguably ~ my artistry ~ is only parts of me that I want youto see
normally, the amount of I porn I see ~ is voiding out my warranty..

What i'm trying to get across is the Vulgarity of it all--goes hand in hand with the previous line---as an Artist/i ONLY show the viewer/listener exactly what i want them to see---but as i show them that and they get begin to get comfortable with it---I must show them the Vulgarity of it--(2 sides to every coin)-----so that Warranty (the viewer/listener figuring that i'm sugar coating it when infact, i am giving you my Highs/Lows and most times my Lows overshadow my Highs....)//nah, the amount of porn i see/voids out my warranty----

GREAT QUESTION===THANK YOU for taking the time to actually READ it....I always got some subtle shit twisted into the lines....

[binary_10essee]

Haha, I gotcha, it makes sense 100% now. Nice work. Do you plan to lay it down?

[iceberg760]

yeah/finishing writing it today (hopefully)...PM your email/can send you a few tracks i've already recorded...Just got a Mic-Pre Amp so my sound should be ALOT more clearer in my upcoming recordings...