I need help with this song anyone? thanks!

[ami7mina]

Hi, I need help with this song... Me and my bandmate are just starting out.
we made a nice track:
https://soundcloud.com/andreia-guerrero/chaneling-refactor/s-RGMf8

But the thing is, for some reason, it's hard to write a lyric to this song.
can anyone tell me what's wrong?
would be greatly appreciated. thanks

 

[bandcoach]

I have words popping in my head as I listen to the opening minute, I'll come back when less tired and transcribe what I am hearing and pm them to you

 

[zendao]

I've heard alcohol helps.