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    killacamxxx is offline Member
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    hot 16 im finna lay down

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    dis finna b on my mixtape but i wanna see if yal can feel the messege and the meaning in it


    i can tell you that dis world is only gonna drawn/
    can't wait till the heavely father steps down/
    to see all his children that he was so crowned/
    kings n queens now snakes and thieves/
    how you gone blame em when they don't really know/
    right from wrong cuz they neva had no soul/
    it's all good tho De Vinci here with the flow/
    die n slow on the cross looking for forgiveness/
    when they bash me down with the words of swiftness/
    was once with the passion of the christ/
    now the money and greed got me looking twice/
    envision death in my dreams so i do it right/
    only seeing what i see wanna see with an open heart/
    the way dis music is put into me im here to make a mark/
    producing deez beat was the step stone for my start/
    uplifting power full when my words leak call it art/

    ---------- Post added at 07:29 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:02 PM ----------

    yo all im asking for is sum feed back cuz i see why 2 many rappers that have no meaning in they raps what so ever and i dont wanna add to the count feel me.

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    eremasi is offline Registered User
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    hey bro,
    i couldnt really get the message off the first four lines but then it progressed nicely, so all good brah.

    link me the song for this when its done - peace

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    yea i got u fosho good look on the feed back yo

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    I like the message in your words, just having some trouble followin the flow. Def. want to hear the delivery when you lay it down though. Keep goin man.


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