guess whos back

**DirtyRice** · 08-01-2005

How can you exist through the fact that you're whack /
My lyrical attack leaves MCs on their back /
I line em up like I'm robbin a bank /
Pull out my gun, next they try to run /
This is getting so violent, you're not desensitized /
Like 10 year olds addicted to tobacco enterprise /
My name is Dirty Rice and I must tell you no lies /
Lyrics shockin so bad there's a glare in your eyes /
This glare was not seen until the age you were between /
From the time you lost your innocence at sixteen /
Virginity stolen, the Saudis be stonin /
For situations like this, it's definitely not bliss /
American GI's, are they good guys /
Providin oil to fuel the apartheids /
And similar movements, conspiracies proven /
Unravelled through time, explained through my rhyme

- Dirty Rice

**Wack** · 08-01-2005

boy you wasnt in this but ok watever/ id wouldnt advice that you do it but you pulled a lever//
my brain went click my gun went pow/ you wanna talk sh*t well wats up now//
in my eyes is aint a galre my eyes are glazed/ an wen im done wit you youll be confused and amazed//
an wat you talkin bout virginity stolen/ i gave it up way back wen i started rollin//
although you still have yours an that aint bad/ jus cuz you wer dresses ya scotish wee lad//
an then you went an started talkin bout the war/ man the ideas in yo mind must be like your wallet very poor//
an yea im wacked i kno it im proud/ i developed MPD i say it out loud//
for you see this other side helps me along/ from street life to wat i say in my song//
an my nicknames wack cuz thats wat we call him/ hes a crazy sob hell tear at ya worse than slim//

**Fat Daddy** · 08-01-2005

Man I don't know bars, I write songs, **** the bar system.

**Bradley** · 08-01-2005

you can't really write songs without the bar system I'm afraid, but to be fair whack's talking about 'text bars' which apparently are twice the length of real bars.

how about you both start again and do a proper number of bars like maybe 16 (make it 8 in whack's case)

**Wack** · 08-01-2005

wat u talkin bout in my case bradley?? a bar is 2 lines i.e.shoobiddy do bop thats how my day went/ one line
now im a tell you how the rest will be spent// two lines or 1 bar
now if vocally thats different fine but we arent singin this stuff wer ritin
if im rong let me kno but thats how i was taught

**Wack** · 08-01-2005

but yea we start over an 8 bars is fine how bout 2 rounds tho

well go u me u me

an once this starts this time no one but in
u got a word or 2 for me then start a new thread or message me however you choose but kindly keep your input out til wer done sound fair to all??

**Semaj** · 08-02-2005

Youll remeber me, the dope mc who causes pain to all who opposes me...
tired of conspired lyrices about the hired...
you had your chance to dance with the champ...
but now like lotto your chances for a stance have toppled
I settle for hammered nd un heralded...
but your mind can handle the perished lyrices of the cherished..
hop eon the lyrical train of the mudane if you feel tame...
but to substain the strained lyrics of the those uncontained...
Dropping a bomb on those who cant respond...
my firends abscond from the stond like stronds...
deal with my lyrical feel, its tyime for me to appeal
to one nad all about the fall of one of those mc's striding tall..
you wantr some of me, bring it, not sing it, chump wanna be's...
yeah, I dropped it, now follow it if you can swallow it...
you think you got it, prove it to me, noo shallow hits (shollow) will proove thee...
my lyrical hotness will smooth theee...
so bring it, not sing it, or you wont groove me...

sotty about the spelling.. I'm about 30 shots to the wind...

**CubaseRox** · 08-02-2005

Originally posted by Wack
homie a bar is 2 lines
u kno that right

A bar is 1 line on a 4/4 time signature.

He rhymed 2 words in each line so it appeared to be 2 bars, but it isnt.

if you tried to say what he wrote over a tempo it wouldnt stay on time.