Give Constructive Criticism
Here goes nothing...
WOKE UP! Saturday MORNING,YARNING,
conscience gave a WARNING, somebody was in my DORMENT, intentions was out to HARM ME, decisions has got me WANTING, nothing but to leave him in TORMENT, my rage is starting to STORMING, my pistol ready and POINTED, I headed around the CORNER, to see his shadow just RUNNING, I constantly started GUNNING, about 30 bullets he STUMBLED, bout 20 more when I CAUGHT HIM, some bummy drunk ALCOHOLIC, was paid to try and come ROB ME, but he done caught him a PROBLEM, he didnt know my rifles ASSAULTED, banana clips on the BOTTOM, but better known as a CHOPPA, that cut him up like BARAKA, more incisions made than a DOCTOR, no where in me was I feeling SORRY, cause he should of entered with CAUTION, so I walked off and fixed me some COFFEE.....
what do yall think??
Last edited by Optimo; 10-01-2003 at 08:08 PM.
The beginning of a new lifestyle as you all now.