Freestyle

[PoTtS]

tell ur man he need to understand that ill leave him w/ a brand
thall be generic when i have crowds goin histearic w/ my flow thast so barbaric but yall cant hear im spittin under my breaath but dont my bring my 2 test cuz im guranteed to pass w/ flyin colors
but this aint no rainbow **** to me it aint no thing to spit at cha truss me im gurantted for life 2 get atcha u best be prepared for combat cha juss aint ready in view my words turn scew turn u black n blue like a fight in elemetery but evetually sum 1 will realize they lookin in steel eyes n they need to back down b4 i cum n attack round ya area it dont get no scaryer then when u see ur whole life pass be 4 ur eyes when u were juss about to reach ur pize n u had so much potential but its estantial that u try not 2 bit off more than u chew dont worry bout me im like a snke in the grass the my jaws unlock when im brakein ur ass in 2 halfs ill take stabs at ur calfs n head up toward ur forehead n look right in ur pupils n tell ya to make urself useful

n/m spellin im t shool high n bored dont feel like editin n e thing juss felt like post n sumthin that was cumin
but ne ways give me a lil feed back

-one-

[big abz]

first of all d verse is wack
secondly it's not a freestyle if ur writing it down

[PoTtS]

1st off all u ****in british queer
u suck can my dick
ne ways i aint ne 2 internet beef so **** off
it souned betta when i spit it i had sum else type right qick in my class
so **** u
mate

[painoner]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
BEST TWO POSTS I'VE EVER READ ON THIS FORUM.

and yeah, the verse was wack, but potis gets props for his hilarious (perhaps unintentionally so) response.

[infradead]

closing thread

if you can't take criticism maybe you shouldn't post on the interent