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[eXtacy]

Perception by Homegrown4.20 on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free


first verse is me and second is my buddy

---------- Post added 06-17-2012 at 09:00 AM ---------- Previous post was 06-15-2012 at 09:50 AM ----------

cmon man, get me some feed, say it sucks say its great idc just say something

---------- Post added 06-20-2012 at 08:34 PM ---------- Previous post was 06-17-2012 at 09:00 AM ----------

still looking for some form of feedback, its just nice to hear what other emcees think

[JD101]

Cant really argue over the topic seems its your perception lol, your verse was ok think you could of gone harder lyrically your flow was nice tho, you kept with the beat, your buddy was a choppy at first then picked up towards the end, nothing really stood out lyrically.

Stay up

JD

[Loopit Fiasco]

Your flow is fine. You and your friend just need to work on your voice inflection. Listen to your favorite rappers and notice how exactly they SAY the words. Try to imitate that. Notice how every word has it's own individual note and pronunciation. Be hyperbolic with your flow. At first you're gonna think you sound really stupid, but believe me, more exaggerated wordplay sounds much better when recorded.

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