critique my rap. ill take negative feedbacks i wana improve

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beat is moster by kanye west

lil black cracka
girl wut u after?
***** im the boss im a motha fu***cking gangsta
jeans at your ancles
give me a sample
right above it lil wayne thats my anthem
i keep it real green and white jets thats my home team
and when i rap my ryhmes so fresh yah im so mean
16 years rated G, tryna keep it clean
swing a bat, knock em out, mom i made the baseball team
wont stop till i get it so enjoy the ride
everybodies got their its time to get mine
all you wana doubt me its just a waste of time
imma circle these bastards non stop like pi
caution caution this beats on lockdown, watch out
imma show you all how to break it down, shot plow
imma show you all how to take em out
kicked so low i left a dent in the fu***cking ground
keep your nose down stay outta my business
blow your house up motha f*cka who did it
swear it wasnt me with god as my witness
you know you sinned beg on one knee for forgivness
listen, whose sh*ts playing when the base hits
lace it before i shove u down in my basement
chase it uve got one dream better make it
rolling stone flying so high homies blazing


ill rap for 50 cents
but this aint g unit
fresher than spearment
yah boi im killing it
im in it to win it
and im not giving in
because i shine soo brite
homie your light is dim
but when we fight in the streets who needs the lights on
when im the queen hes the king and ni**a your the pawn
you got ur 9, metal bat, i dont need no arms
but we can fight in the ring to the death till dawn
so bright lights on make you dimmer homerun im a winner with your man are you cool with that?
4th base make it slide make it jiggle are you livid?smack your balls out the park with my baseball bat
get the jizz get the cheese you albino rat its a big world but your stuck in my mouse trap
you wanabe chris brown wall to wall, gimme that, dumb f*ck keep a note, we just hit a D flat