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    a couple bars....

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    keep it up

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    "Lions roar within my abdomen ~ throw words like a javelin"

    Maaaan!! Nice!

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    Yo that was hot man!

    I rapped it out loud, if i said it like i think you meant it to be said its a mean flow, reminds me of kendrick lamar.

    Trust me on this, im very harsh on most up and coming rappers when it comes to lyrics, but you have some good writing ability man

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    I feel it man. Keep it comming.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Da Shaman View Post
    Yo that was hot man!

    I rapped it out loud, if i said it like i think you meant it to be said its a mean flow, reminds me of kendrick lamar.

    Trust me on this, im very harsh on most up and coming rappers when it comes to lyrics, but you have some good writing ability man

    Thanks Cuz------i'm an old head ~ 37..havent written in over a decade//built a booth @ home and started spitting again-----figured why not...lol......

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