Writing a Song About Having Asperger's Syndrome [Feedback Appreciated]

navas1215

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Using this song for an album I am putting together. Please give feedback, constructive criticism! If there are any questions about the lyrics, feel free to ask.

Savan DePaul - Find The Peace (Aspie Anthem)

Find the peace
Find the peace
Find the peace within you
Find the peace
Find the peace
Find the peace within you

Carpe diem got me turned to leisure
What "seize the day" made me complete a seizure?
Hans Asperger, why I am inflicted with
A mental disorder in higher conditioning
This aspie didn't ask you
Aspie get at you
Ass beat, get that too
This aspie's an asp, too
Savan's organic symphony suckles on simplicity
Saunters on shite and subsides on synergy
(SOS (4x)) foolish little knob
You damn well know you can't comprehend nuance
Poor prosody slash APD conformity
AS substrate don't comform to me
(Break it down)
Expansion of abdomens
Thanks, everyone - exposure to teratogens
(But but but but) deal with it DePaul
Medication dosage ain't healing it at all
So take me, strange organism, from the home
And throw me in suburbia amongst the wolves
And now I speak from the soul
My two favorite buttons are delete and home
Delete and home

I know this is serious, let me explain
Guess how many times that I wept from the pain
Guess how many guys have leapt from the pain
So please don't go disrespecting the names
I know a bit about a bit about mentality
For me personally, AS is my abnormality
Rappers try to be weird
I'm weird tryna be normal
And many others aren't even as fortunate, to be formal

Find the peace
Find the peace
Find the peace within you
Find the peace
Find the peace
Find the peace within you
Find the peace
Find the peace
Find the peace within you
Find the peace
Find the peace
Find the peace within you

For all the mentally tortured, find the peace
For the downtrodden, find the peace
For all the abnormal, find the peace
For all mankind, find the peace
 
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