Wife vocals, husband produces.......need some tips and tricks for vocals

[DJMSherman]

my wife and I made this vocal track a while ago, her the vocals, and I producer....thoughts or any suggestions of what it is lacking . This is my first vocal track ever produced....and had no idea how to do anything.....


https://soundcloud.com/michael-sherman/i-see-you-feat-dasoriginalunmastered

 

[yns_r]

Maan ! It does not lack creativity. I think personaly that the mixing can be better specialy when compared to your latest works. but the overall is very nice. Good job.

Here is my track https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-knows-prod-emakingbeats-529683/#post50023991