Thoughts so far?

[JeremyRudolph]

Just looking for some opinions so far




[Verse 1]

The media trys to shape us and tell us what to be
But **** that shit cause they cant control me
As i look into the mirror what do i see
A ****ed up kid with a magnificent dream
Messing with me is a dangerous game
Cause everyday im slowly going insane
i try to supress it but it causes me strain
i try not to cry but it causes me pain
Its not enough to survive making minimun wage
but the past ruined that now im trapped in a cage
forget about the past I should turn a new page
But ill just burn the book To fuel my rage

[Chorus]

This world, it makes me
but this world ****in hates me
it trys so hard to shape me
but it will never break me

[Verse 2]


I'm done with it, no more abuse
situations bad, its getting hard to diffuse
its about time i put my thoughts to good use
but in this world im all alone
so i hit the microphone
I'm sure when im dead ill be known
and now i need to leave see
isnt nothing left here for me
people hold me down untill i cant breathe
so as i run into the night
i'm well prepared to fight
and i'm not gunna stop until i see the light


[Chorus]

 

[Mistr22]

i think its realy good, with good voice and good beat, my friend it can be insane

 

[Miss Blaze]

Good stuff, this would be better with audio.