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    Sixteen Bars For Sale

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    I am selling a sixteen bar verse for a 100 dollars.

    Sample of verse:
    Every Sunday serpents serving sermons to sinners/
    The profits you pocket separate losers from winners/
    Vets from beginners and empty plates from dinners/
    Heart growing colder while my patience getting thinner,/

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    Anti-religion diatribes leave the listener so cold, sick and tired of mundane mishaps-- attempts at verbiage sold, must be a joke, but the yolk is old, you'll have to do better if you want the gold.

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    We have brains. We can think up our own rhymes:
    Why do you wear that mask?
    You can't run from the past.
    Running from your fears, blinded by tears,
    So many enemies closing in on your rear.
    I am your friend and your peer, I love you my dear.

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    Not here. That would seem queer, people might leer. Then they would jeer.
    See-through hysteria, hysterical-- sheer. George Foreman Grille seers, retail reality? Sears.
    Way forward? Unclear...

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    That'll be $500.

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    There’s enough hateful bigotry in the world as it is, who needs to spend $100 on it?? XD

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    oh oh i wanna play...!

    roses are red
    violets are blue
    i needed an edit, so I could play too.
    Last edited by rhythmgj; 2 Weeks Ago at 10:18 PM. Reason: Bad Form... The buzzer rang!

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