Simile's, Metaphors, Punchlines... Rhyme.

im like a fly im always on some hip hop sh!t
like a hillbilly wit a mouth full of chew ready to spit
 
im like a pelvis on a pogo im hip hop

^ok they cant all be good
 
just cuz you sample sh!t without choppin is past age u a looper
step ya game up ahead of time and be a futureproducer

just a quick one i thought of lol
 
welcome to school children, im teaching verbal-classes
if ya cant see im ballin then you need erkel-glasses
matter of fact, my facts reach the masses
hip hop aint dead man so forget the caskets
my verbal skills are straight so forget these fagots
my punchlines are funnier than a basket of bob sagets
written classics, deeper than your moms baggage
i just speak my mind, what the F*** is a metaphore?
my style aint easy like the neighborhood rent-a-whore

ok im tired and im done

that was a keystyle. and i know i dont spell good haha
 
always on point like decimal, i change it up
like your extent to the power of two i claims the top

haha...next time i tell you!!!
 
alot of these punchlines are too basic or too complex

my verbal skills are straight so forget these fagots <- too basic

there are others were peoples trying to do to much within a small amount of bars

just some feedback
 
hey im teaching this school kids, thats why im sticking to basics
somebody's having a hard time seeing, somebody get him lasek
my verses are hair cuz theyre just off the top of my head
so when my punches suck, i nut and say "get outta my bed"
detention for everybody, yalls rhyme patterns are timed out
like a dr suess book i think these kids are all rhymed out
dont be a bedwetter about keystyles and get pissed
class is over for now............ yall kids are dismissed
 
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most of the time the raps i make are hot
but if im whackest its cos i masturbate alot

^LOL WTF
 
dig me like a record crate dam this is a hot debate, create a plate of words and then feed it to ya mouth and face, i dont need a verse to state i'd fuk the world and get a girl reproduce and try to pro-create, induce vomiting just in case you had to much to drink, and roll away ya night like a slumber party at a skating rink, THINK! im tough as a swisher tip and crush mics so much Shure is imprinted on my fingertips, pick another topic ill pick a verbal booger and flick it givin snot knowledge cuz everything "YOUUUUUUU" spit it's not knowledge, its not gangster persona and to be honest id rather bump some madonna, chewed and washed up as a dead pirahhna, i rain slugs so get a bullet proof umbrella and huddle with rihanna

i posted this a diff thread
 
Youll be like Toni Braxton and never breathe again
I bring emcees on bended knee like Boyz 2 Men

my styles more colorful than Rodman hair

i have a un fathered style call me OL Dirty Bastard
i throw blows like Riddick wit Dukes that cause Hazard
 
yo thansk zazulak, keep droppin words man cuz thiers only a few cats up on here that are even half good, so we need people to keep droppin heat like a bottle of hot sauce :)

ps: is that yo son on ur profile pic?
 
when i write i write with a poison pen
whilst micheal jacksons callin on boyz 2 men
thinking its a delivery service, my deliverys perfect
check the history of my verses whoever dissing me's nervous
punches aint even hittin the surface...

blah blah blah
 
some old punches:

how can you be a muslim and still not blow up in the underground?

like heterosexual tramps im straight filthy

this is shang tsung music, it'll capture your soul

i used to get no props like unemployed actors

When i die ill prolly cause every pen to bleed
become an entity then ill return like the enter key
through your energy, but if i didnt would you remember me?
would you mention me? or would you forget me eventually?

girls dream to hold pearls and i treat these hoes well
if i was famous id stay in a hilton and i dont mean the hotel
 
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been i while since i hit up this thread, lets turn the heat up again! ha

So many cats are spitting like they pissing in the wind,
My flows too damn holy, they had too brand it a sin,
Your own flow is feeble and your confidence, fantastic,
Get ideas above your station, boy, and make me get drastic,
I’ll slap in you your face, like Larry Graham playing bass,
This aint bad boy b***hes, but when I spit it’s like mace,
I’ll leave you in a state that’ll make your mother renounce you,
I’m everything that you yourself thought you would amount to,
Im the oasis in this drought, Im the man in the money,
Im the eclipse that put your lights out, Im the bee to your honey,
She likes the like way I use my tongue, amongst other things,
I told her that I write rhymes that would make any pretty girl sing,
I said I can play the rain by missy in the gap between your thighs,
She went a shade of red, and on her face crept a smile,
And that wasn’t too many hours into the night we first met,
I gotta tell you about your girl mate, she’s a fine arse sket.

uk stand up!!
 
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^quite nice, not any real hot punches tho...still a good verse

UK owns this section

lol ;)
 
yeah come again with the punches explanation? i keep forgetting. i write from the heart, i dont really know the technical terms.

peace
 
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