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    Simile's, Metaphors, Punchlines... Rhyme.

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    Like superman and steel , I'll make your fuc'n mind bend/...
    if you aint down to steal, paul wall pretend/ sit over to the side then.
    WREKLeSs

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    She mad jaded when she spit my name./
    I got these ******* married to the Dick like Jane./
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    X ray peer through walls for ripe coochie./
    from the land where brazirres come undone like Sushi./

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    you a fag that search for penis, and your verse is henious
    whilst i got the tightest delivery since the birth of jesus
    cos with words im genius...
    so many punches my fists hurt so before you spit words
    in a diss verse, know that ill air you out like big lurch
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    With this strike i swing at you, comes in at the
    force to leave another cat nogginless like the sphinx statue

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    buD-butter-butt-buN-bumper/ your name is Bud Bunner?/ come on , we all know your first name is Gunther/ middle the little anal astronaut pillow bitin' muther *ucker/ last that's any fags favorite pelvis thruster/ the SECOND, so don't take me for no buster , call me the rhyme adjuster/ WrikWREK the rhyme and beat constructor...
    WREKLeSs

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    Quote Originally Posted by wrikwrek
    buD-butter-butt-buN-bumper/ your name is Bud Bunner?/ come on , we all know your first name is Gunther/ middle the little anal astronaut pillow bitin' muther *ucker/ last that's any fags favorite pelvis thruster/ the SECOND, so don't take me for no buster , call me the rhyme adjuster/ WrikWREK the rhyme and beat constructor...
    killa cam would have written that first line.... and lets try not target battle bars at anyone since thats not the aim of this thread.
    anyway...

    I got the jaggedest blade bro, you faggots can stay low
    breys know i split u down the middle like a jacket potatoe//
    Moderately dope!

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    im hearing parallels in parables from cities seas apart,
    accents accentuate a difference in mindstate,
    the clock reads 3, the witching hour commences,
    bob marley in a bag enhance my senses...

    not really battle material, but i had to let that one out!

    now a battle flow...

    U think ur flows electic & off the beaten track,
    u bring to mind bobby b, b!tch, u aint got jack,
    you live out of your whip and aint got no change,
    unless ur down on ur knees, tasting candy rain!

    i kno bobby brown didnt sing candy rain, but hey who gives a f**k
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    If I changed, Im swicthin into a better position

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    I can only think what kind of writers they've got to be/
    If they still don't know when to use an apostrophe/
    Last edited by Gripp; 09-12-2007 at 05:37 AM.

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    haha...

    i punch-line like a simile, you can't compare me though
    dude with more soul, then a shoes interior
    Last edited by Bigwon; 09-12-2007 at 03:41 PM.

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