review on a hook please

bbakerw0720

Be Rightt
this is the first hook ive ever written. idk if this shit is cheesy or not lol i just want some feedback please. it goes.

tall girls, short girls, skinny girls.
I- I got a thing for all the girls in the world.
Ya, brown girls, white girls, red girls.
I got a thing for, I, I got a thing for ‘em.

its for this beat
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WqQq8p8x9tY
if you could give me any feedback please id really appreciate it.
 
Honestly, I would have to hear it to pass any judgement. A hook is almost entirely dependent on the way in which it is delivered/produced.

Good luck,

-E.
 
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