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PlaTiNumNEEDleZ

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Hello,
Welcome to Kevin's Rap Corner. The Rap Circle has been filled up to 815 posts and is a pain in the @$$ to reply in. So please, contribute here and start up a new phat @$$ beat my niggaz. Aight. Oh, and drive safely now, BUCKLE UP. And use a condom.

Sincerely,
Pimp Masta Rhyme Fasta 3 DaY Lasta

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Off tha head....Kevins Rap Corner

Dirty Denz be makin it happin
I lost sight of life, with fists I'm smashin
boy don't brag bout tha cash u stashin
The Game put into me this street life passion
turned life around, now I only care for fashion
Like P Diddy I got off chargez laughin
lawyers hand shakin n' back slappin
Denzzy slipped away with news cameras flashin
My life to live with less strife n' ****
My spit is related to kids wit stories that don't quit
I wish kids would get off these hip hop hits
Top 40, Icy Hot Stuntaz, rich kids in cribs is *****!
I just sit back n' play a track spit by Benefit
So Sick is what they call me when I'm on tha mic
Proceed with Caution when I'm not in sight
My Enemy runnin faster from this fight
Freestyle 4 Napster to give MP3 downloads rights.........

I could go on all night givin props ta Benefit
his hip hop mentality, I'm attemptin ta get
expect me ta drop hits for rich kids in cribs
I ain't gonna go *****, never gonna change, I ain't never gonna switch.
Gonna keep on usin words like ill sick
suck my dick, like Nas said ta Kid n' Limp
I've seen mad fiends throw fits with wrist slits
Strippers leave clubs with no existance
I close my eyes n' wish this world was within us.


PEACE.
 
That was aiight, you got some pretty good flow but the scheme is simplistic. Try adding some multi's to it or have some more flow WITHIN each line, instead of only rhyming the last line of each bar with the rhyming word. Just a suggestion, don't take it as nothin personal. I'll keep peepin your ****.

Watch for some of mine, soon to drop.
 
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